I know it will need editing and revisions, but I feel good about the images, scenes and goals here.
Okay, I'll just say it. I love this story. I love Lakhoni and can't wait to see what he does next. The poor kid.
Alright, so here it is. I understand that a new reader will have to do a very counter-intuitive thing to read this book from the start, because they will have to scroll down to read each chapter, but the earliest chapters are all the way at the bottom.
This is 2250 words, making the total word count so far 17,220. That's not really where I should be to finish this as a NaNoWriMo project, but that's okay.
Feel free to share. Heck, I invite you to share-- I'm a writer. I need readers and validation!